Thank you for your story on overall Tucsons and Americas small mom and pop motels. You wrote half but true details of the citizens living their life in motels.
Looks like you forgot to write the details how the drug and prostitution become a pain in the society and
How the motel owners like Jeegarkumar Amin are
Risking their life to support the community and country people! By their honest work, you have seen lot more at the motel how honest and brave motel owner like Jay Amin fighting alone with drug dealers without fear.
Drugs dealers threatening him and him fighting back with lots of courage. I like your report but try to write the whole truth not partial.
Also dont write the humorous and funny discussion between friends and people As a serious and shameful disrespectfull truth. Looks like as a writer it does not show your wide personality. Feels like you trying to show your expertise in modifying the truth.
Again you should keep the truth and humor separate while writing about people. As a writer you are hurting many people and their trust on you while they allow you to write the facts of their life. May be it is just a story for you to create more fans or become popular in news world.
At the end congratulations for your great coverage on peoples real life and your half truths.
Wise people says if you want people to love you
Win the crowd and Win the freedom
Nice report my friend!
Keep it up
Thank you
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Looks like you forgot to write the details how the drug and prostitution become a pain in the society and
How the motel owners like Jeegarkumar Amin are
Risking their life to support the community and country people! By their honest work, you have seen lot more at the motel how honest and brave motel owner like Jay Amin fighting alone with drug dealers without fear.
Drugs dealers threatening him and him fighting back with lots of courage. I like your report but try to write the whole truth not partial.
Also dont write the humorous and funny discussion between friends and people As a serious and shameful disrespectfull truth. Looks like as a writer it does not show your wide personality. Feels like you trying to show your expertise in modifying the truth.
Again you should keep the truth and humor separate while writing about people. As a writer you are hurting many people and their trust on you while they allow you to write the facts of their life. May be it is just a story for you to create more fans or become popular in news world.
At the end congratulations for your great coverage on peoples real life and your half truths.
Wise people says if you want people to love you
Win the crowd and Win the freedom
Nice report my friend!
Keep it up
Thank you